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Let the day keep shining!
posted by
mariss9
on February 14, 2013 at 11:40 AM
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Great poem as it is - I can't see any way to add to it without detracting from it
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2013 at 2:54 AM
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What do you have to say?
posted by
UtahJay
on February 13, 2013 at 1:15 PM
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calia14
mLet your attitude shine on everyone love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 13, 2013 at 11:37 AM
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Thanks for everyone's input so far! I will post the collaboration on Friday night to give everyone a chance to get in their words :)
posted by
calia14
on February 13, 2013 at 11:04 AM
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calia14
mThat’s like a cloudy day. Hope for clearing of minds love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 12, 2013 at 10:01 PM
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I like that you ended the poem with questions, the reader can make up thier mind, too! BRAVO! sam 
posted by
sam444
on February 12, 2013 at 7:03 PM
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That we could keep this going
For many a day.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 12, 2013 at 10:07 AM
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A very nice poem without adding anything to it
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 12, 2013 at 10:07 AM
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Yes, I want to play, I think to start today
outside is cloudy and gray, a good time to write away!!!
posted by
Kabu
on February 12, 2013 at 10:07 AM
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It is great to see your poetry back on here.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 12, 2013 at 9:34 AM
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Hey great poetry! You have a beautiful way with words. 
posted by
Collene
on February 12, 2013 at 9:25 AM
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This is beautiful and inspiring! A poetry canvas begun?..:)
Sparks verse within me not yet cognizant.:) Maybe l'll post something later.
posted by
Katray2
on February 12, 2013 at 9:20 AM
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