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Thank You, BC-A...

posted by PoeticPoetry on October 18, 2012 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: No, myfriend called a professional bug killer. It took the bug people

about a year to rid her place of the bedbugs.

posted by PoeticPoetry on October 18, 2012 at 4:21 PM | link to this | reply

No, myfriend called a professional bug killer. It took the professionals

posted by PoeticPoetry on October 18, 2012 at 4:20 PM | link to this | reply

Re: a "hard nip" is that , in English, a swig of liquor?..... well, it would

not get rid of the bugs.  But, if you had enough 'nips', then guess you would not care

who or what was biting  you...

posted by PoeticPoetry on October 18, 2012 at 4:18 PM | link to this | reply

a "hard nip" is that , in English, a swig of liquor?..... well, it would

posted by PoeticPoetry on October 18, 2012 at 4:17 PM | link to this | reply

Jay, I think you should do what works for you...

posted by PoeticPoetry on October 18, 2012 at 4:15 PM | link to this | reply

PoeticPoetry

CThat’s a good job. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on October 17, 2012 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

Another comment PP . did she use the bug powder as I will cancel my order if it takes a year to eliminate the critters. 

posted by C_C_T on October 17, 2012 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply

I remember learning about Antoinette in French class.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 17, 2012 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

I try these old forms, or rather I tried these old forms when I was a member of the poetry society, but I could not get any of the way I felt on the inside out, you know what I mean. It is not that I'm not serious about poetry, its just feels to binding to me to count syllables and rhyming patterns, but it good practice.

posted by UtahJay on October 17, 2012 at 12:01 AM | link to this | reply

Well I only have fleas, so your advert ecouraging as it might be to assess the contours and juicy spots by passing bed bugs, the good old remedy of a hard nip is also advised .

posted by C_C_T on October 16, 2012 at 10:55 PM | link to this | reply

it is FUN ! once you learn how to write it...

posted by PoeticPoetry on October 16, 2012 at 6:57 PM | link to this | reply

wow!  I admire your ability to write that....I don't have the patience

posted by Annicita on October 16, 2012 at 6:37 PM | link to this | reply