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Glad to see the dragon is no longer draggin'...
And the ice can form on the surface quicker than you think - you're right to empty the barrels. Keep going with the poetry.
posted by
Pat_B
on October 8, 2012 at 12:33 PM
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Frost is soon upon us...You capture the aching heart so well...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 8, 2012 at 9:32 AM
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CC,
Of course I knew you were joking. This poem is excellent. You make wonderful use of imagery and figurative language.
posted by
Amanda__
on October 8, 2012 at 8:30 AM
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Sure Lion time tells as always.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 8, 2012 at 6:34 AM
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Jay if you had written the poem. It would have been OK. I was being a bit mean. It was the parable I just could not hack it.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 8, 2012 at 6:32 AM
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It's funny how the hopes and expectations we have just set us up for disaapointment. Great poem
posted by
lionreign
on October 8, 2012 at 3:24 AM
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It seems they always do...Leave a pain in your heart. I was going to post something earlier today and it just disappeared too. I should know better than to write it all on blogit instead of cut and past. I just want all to know that I wasn't upset, I just thought that no one knew that the thing was not about the lamb, the lamb was the metaphor, or the parable. Perhaps you were right in your comment. If the metaphor, or parable was so hidden as no one could see it, then it should be scrubbed.
posted by
UtahJay
on October 7, 2012 at 11:45 PM
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Re: be careful stopping the medication and does your Dr. know that you are
Well KabuI am not stopping blood pressure tablets, would you like to take something that made you look in the family way , twins.?
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2012 at 11:39 PM
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Re: CCT
Yes I don't just stop Wiley, I monitor my intake. yes we must give him a few bumps when he returns.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2012 at 11:36 PM
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Re: CCT
Naut I think he has had a rough time poor old guy, dream ones do not last long as a rule although they may always seem like a dream at the beginning .
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2012 at 11:34 PM
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Re:
Hi Marisse I don't like taking much of anything but sometimes it is necessary. yes it rained nearly every day after I spent a lot of money on tubs and pumps etc. I don't want the frost to punture the tubs or I shall have to pay the council to dispose of them.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2012 at 11:31 PM
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You could get your kids to buy you a Dragon adnohr for when you start writing in case your fingers get stiff.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2012 at 11:24 PM
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I can imagine how frustrating it could be with the dragon throwing cold water on your creativity - computers can do that - comletely interrupts the flow of thought! GRRR! This is a nice poem - but the writer seems to be on the losing end.
posted by
adnohr
on October 7, 2012 at 7:43 PM
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I have had to stop taking some RX pills myself when they were bad news. I did get better. On the other hand, it really harmed me to quit taking my own RX, kidney stone supplements for another one. I suppose trial and error works best in these matters. I liked the poem very well, nice sentiments! I could almost visualize some of it. 
Shame about the rainwater.
posted by
mariss9
on October 7, 2012 at 4:57 PM
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CCT
That's good news about Rumour! An dream lovers can be crazy and demanding at times, just like real ones...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 7, 2012 at 4:40 PM
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CCT
Wonderful news about Rumor and you watch out with your meds Bro.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 7, 2012 at 1:57 PM
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be careful stopping the medication and does your Dr. know that you are
doing that? It can be dangerous to stop without telling your physician. Cooking up a feast in the kitchen, I feel like my Mother today. and don't cry, life is too short for tears.
posted by
Kabu
on October 7, 2012 at 12:53 PM
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