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A lot of people do fall for it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 26, 2012 at 9:38 AM
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Wonderful, Jay!
I am desert thinking of late too..:) Fool's gold shines for the touch; Kudos! 
posted by
Katray2
on September 26, 2012 at 8:50 AM
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UtahJay
Always wanted to go prospecting for gold after sobring up but then I forgot 'til now.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 26, 2012 at 8:45 AM
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sounds hot dry and dangerous......like most of mankind actually!!
posted by
Kabu
on September 26, 2012 at 8:11 AM
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This is such a great image, I can just see the desolate landscape. I think I'll not worry about gold though :P
posted by
lionreign
on September 26, 2012 at 7:45 AM
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Always wanted to do a bit of gold mining Jay. You are putting me off.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 26, 2012 at 7:35 AM
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edits....prospector's eyes.....the last line is confusing....cuz you have a period....and the but at the beginning leaves the ending not clear....maybe put except when the fever strikes...
good poem though
posted by
Annicita
on September 26, 2012 at 6:15 AM
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When the fever strikes, its times to hide ..:) Loved the poems Utah.
posted by
shobana
on September 26, 2012 at 12:36 AM
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