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Anyone who can write a poem like the one I just read, is never wasting time doing it.
(waist is a part of your body but I would never have mentioned it if it weren't for your comment at the end of your post.)

posted by TAPS. on September 24, 2012 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

quick edits....cross-eyed and wasting not waisting....

posted by Annicita on September 24, 2012 at 11:05 AM | link to this | reply

It's tough to speak a second language...I love how you portrayed her memories.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 24, 2012 at 9:07 AM | link to this | reply

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And I was in university and still can't spell * commented

posted by adnohr on September 24, 2012 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply

Don't feel like an old fool - every day is a learning day while we're here, no matter what you learn. As CC comented, the content counts - and this one was very, very good!

posted by adnohr on September 24, 2012 at 6:00 AM | link to this | reply

What a gorgeous portrait

posted by lionreign on September 24, 2012 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply

posted by contagion_publishing on September 24, 2012 at 3:18 AM | link to this | reply

UtahJay

æThere’s a hot palate Jay.BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on September 24, 2012 at 2:24 AM | link to this | reply

Don't worry Jay content prevails and don't rely on yhis orrible0e spellee checker.

posted by C_C_T on September 23, 2012 at 11:01 PM | link to this | reply