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I like how you had them engage in a dialogue.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 24, 2012 at 9:04 AM
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Interesting Jay to try new methods.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 23, 2012 at 11:05 PM
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ok quick edit....i see someone already noted 2 of them....follow not fallow
nice poem...interesting about the mosquito
posted by
Annicita
on September 23, 2012 at 7:17 PM
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that's the love I share with Wiley. Nicely written
posted by
Kabu
on September 23, 2012 at 6:29 PM
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Line 7: "DOES" (not doe's) somebody really confused you as a kid with that APOSTROPHE. Probably happened in the first grade. (not your fault)
"DOESN'T - means "does not"
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 23, 2012 at 3:47 PM
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