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Go for it. Whatever it takes. Competition isn't the point, for
me at least. The pencil lady is fascinating.
posted by
2902
on September 13, 2012 at 10:35 PM
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UtahJay
Enjoyed the poem,cool man, seems someone got you riled up with your writing after your poetry. Write as many blogs as you want, that's no problem I'm sure. I write one post and usually read one post, and I enjoy your poetry sometimes and other times I just read your humor post. Whatever brought out the 'fighting wording', I have no idea. Peace brother.†
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 13, 2012 at 10:30 AM
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I want to read more of the pencil Lady. See being married to a sober
alcoholic, I absorb every word written by you.I want to learn all that I can and your willingness and humility to share is for me priceless.
I am not sure that I understand about the number one thing that you write about, I just know that if you post i hope not to miss one for they are so good and this will be a book that I shall be buying.
posted by
Kabu
on September 13, 2012 at 10:00 AM
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An interesting person she must have been to have meant...Personally, I do not have a problem with someone doing multiple entries in one day.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 13, 2012 at 10:00 AM
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I love the pencil lady, she was one of the great characters in your life and deserves every poem you write about her.Write on Jay.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 13, 2012 at 7:15 AM
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edits: scared not scarred, Anyone with a car was rich to her, She was really quite nice as a matter of fact, To become whole, real and right, With whom she sells her pencils, lowlands, time or timed?, put the comma after but not before. Try to flip your sentences when you are using commas and see if that eliminates the usage of them...creates a better flow...
Wonderful poem...you explain her so well
posted by
Annicita
on September 13, 2012 at 6:43 AM
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Being chained to her dreams..just like you are Utah and look how creative and beautiful you weave them into words.!!
posted by
shobana
on September 13, 2012 at 5:11 AM
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Being chained to her dreams..just like you are Utah and look how creative and beautiful you weave them into words.!!
posted by
shobana
on September 13, 2012 at 5:11 AM
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You're forgiven, of course -- even encouraged...
When the poem's pushing to be born, you must not try to stop the labor.
posted by
Pat_B
on September 13, 2012 at 4:48 AM
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errr sure, I'll forgive you for posting such great poetry even more frequently - that wasn't hard 
Great poem my friend, she sounds like a fascinating person and well worth the poem
posted by
lionreign
on September 13, 2012 at 3:45 AM
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