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Re: But, by God, she tried, and so did you! Sir Philip Sydney's a hard
I guess I need to write something in order to cancel this. It just keeps coming back when I log on.
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PoeticPoetry
on September 18, 2012 at 3:32 PM
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Re: But, by God, she tried, and so did you! Sir Philip Sydney's a hard
Thank you for reading my poem
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PoeticPoetry
on September 12, 2012 at 11:17 AM
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Re: But, by God, she tried, and so did you! Sir Philip Sydney's a hard
Thank you for reading my poem
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 12, 2012 at 11:17 AM
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Smile
UtahJay. Whataname. It has a 'ring' to it; no doubt about it. 
You are very wise, Utahjay. Tell me, WHAT, did you see, "right off"??
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PoeticPoetry
on September 10, 2012 at 8:24 PM
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Re: But, by God, she tried, and so did you! Sir Philip Sydney's a hard
You know, something so precious that protects 'young' poets (and they can be any age) is our naivete and our enthusiasm. We will try anything because we do not know any better. Our minds are simple, uncluttered and UNknowledgeable so therefore we are unafraid. We are still children and children are able to play in an uninhibited way. Jacqueline
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 10, 2012 at 8:21 PM
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I told you, you would be hit. I saw it right off.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 10, 2012 at 7:51 PM
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Can't seem to stay with such rhythm...very good work!
posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on September 10, 2012 at 7:13 PM
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Well done!
posted by
Katray2
on September 10, 2012 at 7:05 PM
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But, by God, she tried, and so did you! Sir Philip Sydney's a hard
act to follow, conceits and all, but you have gone where angels fear to tread! My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun at Jones Beach and summer's lease hath all too short a date, I guess. Please keep writing!
posted by
2902
on September 10, 2012 at 6:25 PM
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