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I like the way you explain this poetry Jay, I think you will receive a much greater response
from this exercise.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 22, 2012 at 11:55 PM
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utah...great job.....but it should be planned not planed....
posted by
Annicita
on August 22, 2012 at 7:17 PM
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Those memories have been firmly etched into your mind.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 22, 2012 at 10:03 AM
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Mothers see far more than kids realize, she knew that rotten green eyed
Monster was getting her deserts. Another really good post friend Jay.
posted by
Kabu
on August 22, 2012 at 8:21 AM
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UtahJay
RMy father rode in an open plane Jay. BC-A.Bill’s R®st.
posted by
BC-A
on August 22, 2012 at 7:27 AM
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UJ
So glad you are back writing this lovely poetry.
posted by
Justi
on August 22, 2012 at 3:32 AM
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PPS - Again, I love that title!
posted by
2902
on August 22, 2012 at 2:07 AM
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PS I looked back at the other works you posted since coming back.
I wish you luck with your project and look forward to seeing subsequent chapters!
Personally, I would never attempt it, myself. I think I'd find it too restricting and run out of interesting stuff to say.
But I AM interested in trying my hand at some story-telling in verse - take a look at the "Signed on with Ulysses" series I started, and tell me what you think. I have another episode coming up in a few days.
posted by
2902
on August 22, 2012 at 2:06 AM
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I was at war with my older sister (8 years) too. Miraculously, she turned
into a pleasant adult whom I like a lot now, though I wish she wouldn't talk so much.
She tells me I've grown tolerable, too. I've been out to see her twice where she lives now, Priest River Idaho.
posted by
2902
on August 22, 2012 at 1:49 AM
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