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I like this a great deal - wonderful use of imagery! 
posted by
lionreign
on August 21, 2012 at 3:08 AM
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shobana
Lovely and I sure can relate to the thorns of roses.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 20, 2012 at 8:02 PM
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short and succinct...nice job
posted by
Annicita
on August 20, 2012 at 7:58 PM
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it reads as though something terrible has happened to shatter young love
very well written dear one.
posted by
Kabu
on August 20, 2012 at 3:40 PM
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H'm this could mean abuse of a terrible kind if this is what I think it means to purport . One cannot disguise the beast in nature. Shobana.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 20, 2012 at 11:25 AM
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You describe well how love can go.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 20, 2012 at 9:51 AM
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How nice it is to read you again, your talent staggers me.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 20, 2012 at 9:09 AM
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love is a hard emotion to understand
posted by
Lanetay
on August 20, 2012 at 9:05 AM
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shobana
JYtWe all know of people like that love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on August 20, 2012 at 5:33 AM
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