Go to Poetry by Controversyme
- Add a comment
- Go to WHAT MAKES THIS WORLD SO GREAT
Re: Amen.
And Halleluiah! 
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on August 16, 2012 at 7:48 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
It really would be a better place Annicita. Thank you for the visit, read, and comment. I appreciate it.
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on August 16, 2012 at 7:46 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
true and many times we are more alike than different. Thank you for the visit, read and comment FS.
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on August 16, 2012 at 7:45 PM
| link to this | reply
Amen.
posted by
2902
on August 16, 2012 at 5:59 PM
| link to this | reply
so true...and if people would concentrate on our commonalities instead of our differences ....well the world be a lot more pleasant and interesting
posted by
Annicita
on August 16, 2012 at 12:29 PM
| link to this | reply
A lot of themes are shared amongst us.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 16, 2012 at 10:04 AM
| link to this | reply
Re:
Thank you CCT, yes, we truly are all different, it's a wonderful thing! 
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on August 16, 2012 at 9:26 AM
| link to this | reply
Re: controversyme
I'll take a look at that, thank you and I always appreciate feedback Pannonian.
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on August 16, 2012 at 9:26 AM
| link to this | reply
The trouble is we all feel so danged different. Liked it.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 16, 2012 at 12:18 AM
| link to this | reply
controversyme
As you are aiming to get your poems into print and hopefully get paid, I am wondering if the poem (nice poem) wouldn't improve if the middle stanza was reduced/changed to conform with the number of lines in the two other stanzas. I am no poet so don't take me too seriously. This is just a thought.
posted by
Pannonian
on August 15, 2012 at 10:26 PM
| link to this | reply