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Pretty rough times Marrise, it always has been for some. Thank you.

posted by C_C_T on August 11, 2012 at 9:28 AM | link to this | reply

Very fine recollections and memories.  They remind me of that WWII movie that came out at the beginning of the year 


 

posted by mariss9 on August 11, 2012 at 8:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: The first poem talking through your Father is a wonder. I cannot get beyond

Well he was not a real gypsy Kabu his Mother had been brought up as a gentlewoman on a farm that was prosperous until the parents died and the sons let it all go. 

posted by C_C_T on August 11, 2012 at 12:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Hi Wiley Yes you remember and he probably seemed old when he came home. Wars do that to a man. 

posted by C_C_T on August 11, 2012 at 12:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Pat

I suppose they were plentiful in those days Pat. A little pan of partridge eggs and a few mushrooms. I stayed with an old Aunt once and we went mushrooming I remember we had a job to carry them home safetly they kept spilling out of our overloaded bags.  

posted by C_C_T on August 11, 2012 at 12:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Pannonian

Yes very funny, but you see I like the occasional waft of contaminated air that you enjoy and I have this thing about most things. However I am sorry really if I bundled you as a stereotype, one has to answer rather too quickly to some questions and apologizing is nothing new. 

posted by C_C_T on August 11, 2012 at 12:34 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FS

Thank you FS I don't think this poem has changed a lot in reality if one can get a plot.

posted by C_C_T on August 11, 2012 at 12:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re:TAPS

I think a lot of kids will miss this kind of recollections of their own families Taps a sense of belonging.

posted by C_C_T on August 11, 2012 at 12:13 AM | link to this | reply

I love the way you write of days gone by and people long gone.  It always makes me start thinking of my own family history.

posted by TAPS. on August 10, 2012 at 2:36 PM | link to this | reply

An incredible poem about your father there...Reading about life in the early 1950s was interesting to, somthing this history major enjoys reading about.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 10, 2012 at 1:01 PM | link to this | reply

CCT

"Pannion having never kept a diary for more than a week. I suggest self disciplined people are the most likely and young girls, both for different reasons. I don't know what they are though. The morning sun is the really great thing to happen since neighbours cut their trees it plonks itself in the East."

In the East? How monotonous. Have you considered relocating to somewhere where high mountains dominate the landscape? 

posted by Pannonian on August 10, 2012 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with the comments by Wiley and Kabu.

The bird's nest on the ground your boy robbed reminds me of a phrase I've heard people use, years ago. I believe the saying goes "easy as finding a bird's nest on the ground," that came from days when people worked the fields and foraged for extras on the way home. Greens, wild fruits and berries, eggs...

posted by Pat_B on August 10, 2012 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply

CCT

Wonderful poetic conversation about your dad. My dad was over there in that war and thankfully came home. The story and poem are alike, it is quite wonderful and it always amazes me how you can turn a story into a poem that flows more beautifully than rhyming. Have a peace filled weekend my friend.

posted by WileyJohn on August 10, 2012 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply

The first poem talking through your Father is a wonder. I cannot get beyond

posted by Kabu on August 10, 2012 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply