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PatB

Good for you unsubscribing that clown.I love the story and I'm looking forward to however she gives him a kick in has cojones. LOL

posted by WileyJohn on June 7, 2012 at 6:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos - in an ideal world, should not passion .... range freely?

I'm doing my best to be objective, which is not easy since I was involved in the fallout from their story. There's more than two sides to every story, and in truth as in fiction it's never completely right on one side and completely wrong on the other. Also, a hero has to have a flaw, a villain has to have a touch of good in order to be interesting.

Just trying to tell a good story.

posted by Pat_B on June 7, 2012 at 1:44 PM | link to this | reply

Pat

It's nice and - restrained...Maybe the celestial setting imposes restraint. On the other hand, in an ideal world, should not passion be allowed to range freely?

posted by Nautikos on June 7, 2012 at 12:07 PM | link to this | reply

No Pat kick his ass. It is a bit different talking to someone when there is no magnetism

to stir ones imagination. We sometimes feel that as we get older, it makes it easier  to feel comfortable, but not so great for the other person whose little nerves twitch and are reactive to the old stimulus. I like this.

posted by C_C_T on June 7, 2012 at 11:14 AM | link to this | reply

darling this is so good. Dialogue is one of your great talents with your

writing. I am waiting for her to rip him, shred him, tear him apart and then .....well that is your job!

posted by Kabu on June 7, 2012 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

When is NaNoWriMo? I want to watch her put him in his place!!!

posted by adnohr on June 7, 2012 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

By that time I'll need reminding.  I'm so forgetful these days with my one-track mind and you give us so much to read.

posted by TAPS. on June 7, 2012 at 5:55 AM | link to this | reply