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Yes, very clever as someone else said. Well done.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 24, 2012 at 10:34 AM
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Through life we learning through our actions and inactions.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 24, 2012 at 10:15 AM
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Sinome
You endured the night and then created beauty in words love
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 24, 2012 at 10:07 AM
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Ooh that is so clever! The imagery is beautiful and I love the sense of growth in this one
posted by
lionreign
on January 24, 2012 at 8:27 AM
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Sinome
Û The reader follows a dreamlike adventure. It finishes suddenly at the end without rescue. So the talent’s here flows in the parallel to a nightmare love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on January 24, 2012 at 6:09 AM
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This was fantastic, loved the ending.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 24, 2012 at 5:57 AM
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The poem's speaker is no longer an easy mark.
posted by
2902
on January 24, 2012 at 12:05 AM
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wine or water....would taste better than crow...loved it marta...Ray
posted by
Raysongs
on January 23, 2012 at 11:49 PM
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No I think you would have to swallow a lot of wine Simone , It is an interesting poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2012 at 11:47 PM
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