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I may be repeating myself, but you so have the knack of describing a scene! The way your characters act and speak puts the reader right in there amongst them. I can smell that coffee, picture the pie. Much better than watching a movie!

posted by adnohr on December 30, 2011 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply