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very moving

and so glad to hear from you. Have missed you lately.Hope you're back for a awhile.Ray

posted by Raysongs on December 20, 2011 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply

Just on different planes but not alone in the dark. God bless you and yours. Merry Christmas and Happy Hanukkah.

posted by Justi on December 19, 2011 at 9:41 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful use of language and timing. Somehwere is the middle I met you in our veil of tears. I like how you touched upon it and kept on moving. I also like the end, because it is not what it seems to be, and in fact, I felt consoled.

posted by jfm32 on December 19, 2011 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

more from my darling friend. sigh with pleasure.

posted by Kabu on December 19, 2011 at 2:24 PM | link to this | reply

You never fail to be intensely lyrical in what you write/ I loved this.

posted by 2902 on December 19, 2011 at 12:04 PM | link to this | reply

Such a sad feeling that it evokes.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on December 19, 2011 at 9:55 AM | link to this | reply

It seems you not only have the darkness to quietly feel your pain and sorrow, but you also bring it to each and every word of the poetry you write.  It must be cathartic - writing, that is.  

posted by Troosha on December 19, 2011 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

well written Simone, I really enjoy your work.

posted by spiderfly on December 19, 2011 at 12:37 AM | link to this | reply