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Oof - I could smell it too, and it isn't from nursing! Great story - love how it ends!
posted by
adnohr
on September 20, 2011 at 3:11 AM
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you are such an absolutely wonderful writer...such a scene as
you described, I could almost smell the odour.....well from Nursing perhaps.
posted by
Kabu
on September 19, 2011 at 5:53 PM
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PatB
That was very graphically written luv, I got it O.K.????LOL
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 19, 2011 at 5:22 PM
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You definitely know how to paint a "pretty" word picture.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 19, 2011 at 3:40 PM
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