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Very nicely put - you have a great talent for expression
posted by
lionreign
on September 14, 2011 at 8:40 AM
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Whisperer4U
R Visit me any time love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 14, 2011 at 4:28 AM
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A good poem Whispers I like the idea of walking the straight and narrow.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 13, 2011 at 10:54 PM
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It is indeed a journey! I liked how the words were arranged to accentuate the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 13, 2011 at 10:05 PM
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whisperer4u
I just loved that, the entire poem but this here;
"Soul's experiment
Trying to be human"
special as the poet.!!!!
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 13, 2011 at 8:35 PM
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Soul's journey simply stated, kudos! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on September 13, 2011 at 6:48 PM
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some times i feel tired on that path...just lately i admit to feeling tired
posted by
Kabu
on September 13, 2011 at 5:47 PM
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