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Thank you, sam.  Sometimes, I just start writing...and I don't know what's going to show up.  I just let myself be a channel, and let it flow

posted by Whisperer4U on September 8, 2011 at 1:11 PM | link to this | reply

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No, CHIFFCHAFF, I don't carry around oxygen...but, I am CPR certified  Thank  you for your kind comment

posted by Whisperer4U on September 8, 2011 at 1:09 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, Bill.  I believe the aspiration of every great artist is to touch someone, and have them feel

posted by Whisperer4U on September 8, 2011 at 1:07 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, UtahJay...I felt something when I wrote it

posted by Whisperer4U on September 8, 2011 at 1:05 PM | link to this | reply

I liked how this one came together with the refrain accentuating the imagery! sam 

posted by sam444 on September 8, 2011 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply

This is your poetry whispers I like anything in the first person. It is great, do you supply Oxygen?

posted by C_C_T on September 8, 2011 at 12:16 AM | link to this | reply

Whisperer4U

J We get into your words love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on September 7, 2011 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

This one is beautiful and touches my heart.

posted by UtahJay on September 7, 2011 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply