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Your story is moving along very nicely.  I'm enjoying it so much.
Just this week, my old brother-in-law was worrying about my reputation.  I'm planning a trip out of state to visit my Sis who is in a nursing center with her Alzheimers getting worse all the time.  My BIL loves the idea of me coming and he wants me to stay with him in his big house instead of going to a motel/hotel, but he wants me to bring a chaperon along because he is worried about my reputation staying with him alone.  I really didn't know people worried about that anymore.  But he is very old-fashioned and a very nice old guy. 

posted by TAPS. on August 2, 2011 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

The interactions between the characters are clever.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 2, 2011 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

Walt Whitman really wrote lines that way sir.

posted by BC-A on August 2, 2011 at 12:39 AM | link to this | reply

T I thought that you aligned it that way intentionally sir. But software has a mind of its own sir. Bill’s R{{st

posted by BC-A on August 2, 2011 at 12:38 AM | link to this | reply

I always type or transfer my work to wordpad and then I copy and paste! It serves two purposed for me, one to make sure I don't lose any work and two, to make sure I get it lined up the way I want! I think she will find her man to love her too! But, I really want to see Tom give him the business, though! lol sam 

posted by sam444 on August 2, 2011 at 12:30 AM | link to this | reply

I always type or transfer my work to wordpad and then I copy and paste! It serves two purposed for me, one to make sure I don't lose any work and two, to make sure I get it lined up the way I want! I think she will find her man to love her too! But, I really want to see Tom give him the business, though! lol sam 

posted by sam444 on August 2, 2011 at 12:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: It is such a good read one doesn't notice anything uneven. it is just
Well it is a bit old fashioned Kabu but the notes are twenty years old and I felt damned old at 25.

posted by C_C_T on August 2, 2011 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C.C...I agree with Kabu....
I just can't seem to get the printing to stop running across the page Rumor I've tried word I don't know if one can align it somehow.

posted by C_C_T on August 2, 2011 at 12:16 AM | link to this | reply

C.C...I agree with Kabu....
The read is good and the reader doesn't notice any uneveness....and the the plot seems to be thickening, so you are keeping us on our toes.....

posted by Rumor on August 1, 2011 at 1:47 PM | link to this | reply

It is such a good read one doesn't notice anything uneven. it is just
so daily life, your writing is amazing. i remember when i was a girl in my teens, anyone over 25 was old!!!!

posted by Kabu on August 1, 2011 at 12:10 PM | link to this | reply

Sorry writing is a bit uneven but I know it is worse running across the page.

posted by C_C_T on August 1, 2011 at 11:35 AM | link to this | reply