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I was in alot of pain when I wrote this. You guys surely help; Dear Elyse, those butterflies are enchanting!
posted by
Raye09
on July 6, 2011 at 6:24 PM
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~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 3, 2011 at 2:51 PM
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Excellent.
/ The poem mechanically goes through the emotional process of hurt love. –BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on July 3, 2011 at 4:12 AM
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I can feel pain as i read this it is so well written....sad very sad.
posted by
Kabu
on July 2, 2011 at 4:57 PM
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Awesome affirmation and one should always take charge to improve themselves at all time! Very well expressed, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 2, 2011 at 2:45 PM
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The pain of the speaker has been expressed so well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 2, 2011 at 10:49 AM
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