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Thank You All for the Great Comments and Straightforward, Great Minds, eh?
...:) Actually your poem caught my eye because I had just finished this (started a few years ago) and was getting ready to post.
Oppressive pre summer heat has me pretty drained; been out and about gardening, yard work, etc., too much lately but it's so hard staying cooped up inside now.
Until I start feeling really yucky then my world is inhalers, the nebulizer and book reading aka sleeping mostly, lol, in my icy cold room. I'm on the mend again though and hope to be able to be back on the 'puter soon.
posted by
Raye09
on June 6, 2011 at 7:05 AM
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Coincidentally pain is a theme in your poem too...
posted by
Straightforward
on June 6, 2011 at 5:42 AM
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so much here that really moves me...and to realize it's a 'realization' an epiphany as such - well - it simply touches me all the more. Beautiful writing. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 5, 2011 at 7:21 PM
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very revealing and intense and so well written as amazing as the creator
of this work is.
posted by
Kabu
on June 5, 2011 at 1:45 PM
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The pain the speaker is feeling runs deep...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 5, 2011 at 10:03 AM
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Excellent...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 5, 2011 at 8:08 AM
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Well of course Raye it all seemed very bad but I suppose a good spirit makes do with what is available and supports the body in every way it can. A revealing poem, it is good that you can express these feelings instead of being captive to them.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 5, 2011 at 6:58 AM
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Deep pain and insights here...an awakening...well done!
posted by
Ariala
on June 5, 2011 at 5:31 AM
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For me there's a lot to be said for enlightenment! And the realization that something is amiss is very revealing although there was a degree of satisfaction with life as presented! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 5, 2011 at 4:41 AM
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