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{ The words renew love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on April 20, 2011 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

Open indeed, filled with optimism! I loved the last line! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 20, 2011 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

Nicely done, Raye...excellent!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on April 19, 2011 at 11:45 PM | link to this | reply

Raye, there's nothing like open windows and warm sunshine...
The fresh air and the natural warmth feel and smell so good, they are like a balm of healing, even for a few hours....nicely said.....

posted by Rumor on April 19, 2011 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

Loved it, Raye!

good to see you!

posted by shelly_b on April 19, 2011 at 10:01 AM | link to this | reply

well written and you make me want to dance around the house
singing of spring and love and hope and happiness. now that is a wonderful talent to give another such feelings.

posted by Kabu on April 19, 2011 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

This poem makes me feel good inside.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 19, 2011 at 9:20 AM | link to this | reply

Nice and optimistic today Ray perhaps the sunshine will give you inner strength. Such a nice poem.

posted by C_C_T on April 19, 2011 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

I like this poem, it is what my cats live for...to lie in the warmth of sun.

posted by UtahJay on April 19, 2011 at 6:28 AM | link to this | reply