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Re: This and the previous poem are quite lovely! I just posted a haiku that is
Thank you.  The challenge of getting the most out of the least words is what I like about haiku. (That and I am probably not creative enough to pen an epic poem!)

posted by KRBrandli on July 6, 2011 at 3:05 AM | link to this | reply

I do like a good storm, but not one that lasts! BRAVO! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 16, 2011 at 10:25 AM | link to this | reply

Spot on and well done.

posted by UtahJay on April 16, 2011 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

R Good show. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on April 16, 2011 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

This and the previous poem are quite lovely! I just posted a haiku that is
intentionally ugly.  I love the way a haiku's compression gives each word more weight!

posted by 2902 on April 16, 2011 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply