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A well written seat of your pants poem...I liked it.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 4, 2011 at 11:49 AM
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mister murder
à Your suspense and in this poem you use imagery with the senses. I guess there’s an analogy here. It’s interesting. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on April 4, 2011 at 9:42 AM
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This one is powerful and I can sense the never give up attitude in it too! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 3, 2011 at 11:49 PM
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Good imagery
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on April 3, 2011 at 9:35 PM
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