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Thank you.....
I've been weathering my own storm.....and I look forward to spring's renewing powers.   Allowing me to focus on the rebirth of everything around me....God Bless.

posted by Corbin_Dallas on March 12, 2011 at 7:54 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

¢ Thank you for a beautiful day love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on March 12, 2011 at 4:13 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

......."always  something comes,
so I sit in the void your absence left
where the memory of what was roams,
and I wait."

How very beautiful your poetry is and there is always something that really touches my heart, from past a past life of a wife who died. After 8 years I couldn't 'sit and wait' anymore but life called me to a new and another wonderful love. 

posted by WileyJohn on March 11, 2011 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

the  pain and the sadness that I so well conceal
do not get any smaller with the absence of tears.
I cannot cry ,

 BEAUTIFUL, AND I LOVE THE ENDING, IF YOU WAIT THEN YOU MUST EXPECT SOMETHING, WHICH IS A MEASURE OF FAITH WHICH IS ALWAYS A GOOD THING.

posted by Riversidepoet on March 11, 2011 at 12:16 PM | link to this | reply

The waiting is the hardest part as they say.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 11, 2011 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply

yes i agree most of us are concerned and worries abound but you write
such beauty always.

posted by Kabu on March 10, 2011 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply

I don't know but everyone has a little tear in them these days I think Sinome - beautiful.

posted by shobana on March 10, 2011 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply

A very sad poem that reminds me of that old song, tears of a clown, not that you are a clown by any means, but like that clown you too hide your tears. Very well written of course.

posted by UtahJay on March 10, 2011 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply