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well now, this certainly got my attention in a hurry....
an ominous beginning......

posted by Rumor on March 5, 2011 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

wow what the heck happened?

posted by Lanetay on March 4, 2011 at 9:33 AM | link to this | reply

uh oh... ominous start....

posted by lionreign on March 4, 2011 at 6:57 AM | link to this | reply

interesting read but sad too.

posted by Inspired7211 on March 4, 2011 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

Good writing, great reading.  As I have said before, I love your stories about Australia.  Waiting for more of this story.

posted by TAPS. on March 3, 2011 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu and Wiley John

® Oh, my I can’t wait to find out what happens love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on March 3, 2011 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

Cliff hanger. Wonderful! You are going to continue tomorrow, right?

posted by adnohr on March 3, 2011 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu, reminded me of the movie "Australia"..A wonderful story in the making looks like.

posted by shobana on March 3, 2011 at 6:51 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu
Whoa! That sure was a shock, right at the beginning of the story...

posted by Nautikos on March 3, 2011 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

Those are some hot days to be working. I am looking forward to seeing where this story goes.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 3, 2011 at 4:07 PM | link to this | reply

This is going to be a great one.... I can tell that. Sad but life has those parts so often. Keep it coming.

posted by Justi on March 3, 2011 at 2:54 PM | link to this | reply

Kabuiepie-;)
How very sad this post is, and certainly portrays the heat and isolation some had to live and survive in. Great writing love.

posted by WileyJohn on March 3, 2011 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply

OMG!
What a scary beginning.

posted by Pat_B on March 3, 2011 at 1:22 PM | link to this | reply

Fictional, but sounds true to life in some cases. 

posted by mariss9 on March 3, 2011 at 12:11 PM | link to this | reply