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Very special quality.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on February 13, 2011 at 1:39 PM
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These are truly beautiful
I love that dream-like quality you have
posted by
malcolm
on February 13, 2011 at 12:34 PM
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Thank You All for the Wonderful Comments!!
I'm having some major computer troubles; the fix is in the works but in the meantime, I'm on a borrowed machine so kind of limited in commenting, etc.
posted by
Raye09
on February 13, 2011 at 8:53 AM
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Re: chuck ibrahim
Y A beautiful analogy and imagery love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 13, 2011 at 3:23 AM
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Such a beautiful imagery
You are talented in poetry. Regards, Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 12, 2011 at 10:36 AM
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Beautiful, just amazing imagery, and in olde world style which makes it that much more like a song.
posted by
juliah
on February 12, 2011 at 12:40 AM
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I always thought it would be fun to give my home a name.
We called the home where my sons grew up "Quincy" but never made it official nor inscribed a sign.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 11, 2011 at 7:13 PM
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Oh this is just so gorgeous..I can see the waterfall, hear the serenade while watching the skylight..absolutely marvelous poem Raye.
posted by
shobana
on February 11, 2011 at 7:12 PM
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I loved this one, and soon I intend to go to my "cloud of bed" what a great line and what a wonderful poem.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 11, 2011 at 6:00 PM
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The poem flows very well and everything fits in perfectly.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 11, 2011 at 5:01 PM
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I liked the three parts and how they complement and provided a cohesiveness to the poem! The imagery was very vivid and it sounds wonderful when read aloud! BRAVO!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 11, 2011 at 2:54 PM
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Raye09
Kind of a wonderful tribute to St. Valentine's and love my FriendlyRaye
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 11, 2011 at 11:47 AM
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fantastic the pendulum is swinging within you between passion and
the warmth of loving.
posted by
Kabu
on February 11, 2011 at 11:41 AM
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I suppose home is where the heart is Raye, who said that? Comforting words surely you can pick. Yes great.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 11, 2011 at 11:14 AM
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raye, such clear and vivid imagery....
and almost eerily romantic....very nice..
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posted by
Rumor
on February 11, 2011 at 10:11 AM
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Re: whoa...nice work!!!
Thank you, Ariala!...
posted by
Raye09
on February 11, 2011 at 6:06 AM
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whoa...nice work!!!
posted by
Ariala
on February 11, 2011 at 5:59 AM
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