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how nicely the beauty of a snowfall can cover our soiled
and dirty world....putting a fresh face on everything it touches..
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posted by
Rumor
on February 9, 2011 at 1:35 PM
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I liked the affirmation that things can be rejuvenated, even if only for a moment! And the imagery was perfectly set up to this point and then the follow up imagery gave the poem great perspective! I read it silently then aloud and it becomes more accentuated when read aloud and I thought that to be very impressive; after all poetry is meant to be read aloud! But some poems do not reach this plateau however so that makes this one a bit more special! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 9, 2011 at 12:25 PM
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Good to hear, TAPS! It is a very
cool word, methinks..:)
Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on February 9, 2011 at 9:01 AM
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Thanks so much, Lionreign...
posted by
Raye09
on February 9, 2011 at 8:59 AM
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Thank you, Chuck!...
posted by
Raye09
on February 9, 2011 at 8:58 AM
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Very appreciated, CC!
posted by
Raye09
on February 9, 2011 at 8:56 AM
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Happy to "meet" you, Juliah - Thank you!
posted by
Raye09
on February 9, 2011 at 8:56 AM
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Thank you so much, Dear Elyse!..
posted by
Raye09
on February 9, 2011 at 8:55 AM
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Re: Raye09
Most appreciated, WileyFriend..
posted by
Raye09
on February 9, 2011 at 8:54 AM
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Good point, FSI! Thank you...
posted by
Raye09
on February 9, 2011 at 8:54 AM
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Re: renewal portrayed with such beauty. what lovely poetry you create darling.
Thank you so much, Dear Kabu...
posted by
Raye09
on February 9, 2011 at 8:53 AM
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Great! I love it. I learned a new word (new to me).
I don't ever remember reading the word "nival" before, so...
of course I googled it. Now I'm going to use it in emails until I'm sure I won't forget it.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 9, 2011 at 8:01 AM
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This is enchanting
posted by
lionreign
on February 9, 2011 at 7:52 AM
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you always put things beautifully
regards, chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 9, 2011 at 7:33 AM
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cleverly written Raye you have an intriguing style, moving
posted by
C_C_T
on February 9, 2011 at 12:17 AM
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The imagery of the snowfall is lovely, and exactly the kind of poem I would fumble to write, so I'm happy to read it.
posted by
juliah
on February 8, 2011 at 10:43 PM
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Raye, I can see this as a lovely, beautiful portrait ~ the snow and purity and my goodness but you write so wonderfully ~ xoxox ELyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 8, 2011 at 10:36 PM
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Raye09
Poetry like a beautiul prayer luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 8, 2011 at 7:30 PM
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So much can change in one moment...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 8, 2011 at 6:56 PM
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renewal portrayed with such beauty. what lovely poetry you create darling.
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Kabu
on February 8, 2011 at 4:40 PM
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Thank you, Shobana...
posted by
Raye09
on February 8, 2011 at 4:33 PM
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Love the imagery of painting the old world into new Raye - excellent poem.
posted by
shobana
on February 8, 2011 at 4:32 PM
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