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does remind me of Hair brushing ~ and I can feel my Mamma (who's been dead for years now) still brushing, tugging sometimes at my hair... this one is vibrant with many a descriptive point. Elyse
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elysianfields
on January 18, 2011 at 10:00 PM
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Yes, it is, FSI!..:) Thank you for the visit.
posted by
Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 7:17 PM
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Hair care can sure be a lot of work.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 18, 2011 at 7:12 PM
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Re: lol, I do the same thing!
I dunno, Shelly, my hair's pretty important to me. The naysayers can say it's dead all they want; I know better..:) Good to hear from ya!
posted by
Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 4:23 PM
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lol, I do the same thing!
I was playing some song on the ukulele last night. . . well, this morning at 1am and it didn't mean a gosh darn thing! lol
Awesome poem as usual!
posted by
shelly_b
on January 18, 2011 at 11:31 AM
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Re: Ray09
Very true, Bill! Thanks so much...
posted by
Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 5:28 AM
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Yes, it can, CC!..:) Thank you...
posted by
Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 5:27 AM
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Glad you enjoyed, Shobana..:) Thank you!
posted by
Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 5:27 AM
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Re: HOW COME THEN IT MADE ME RUN MY FINGERS THROUGH
Long hair rocks, no matter if it's breathing or not, lol..I bet yours was gorgeous, Dear Kabu!
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Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 5:26 AM
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Thank you, Dear Sam..
posted by
Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 5:24 AM
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Re: Raye09
Thanks so much, Dear WileyFriend!
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Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 5:24 AM
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Ray09
Y However they’re always be a part of you love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on January 18, 2011 at 2:26 AM
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Come on Raye you know it can look ravishing and your words keep it alive.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 12:20 AM
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I think it has a sexy tone to it Raye - long hair being stroked to the sound of static electricity and song..:)
posted by
shobana
on January 17, 2011 at 9:36 PM
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HOW COME THEN IT MADE ME RUN MY FINGERS THROUGH
MY HAIR AND REMEMBER ALL THE YEARS THAT i WORE IT SO LONG
i THINK IT IS LOVELY AND SENSUAL.
posted by
Kabu
on January 17, 2011 at 8:41 PM
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It felt like: what lurks in the shadow! And it can be taken many ways depending upon one's mood as well for me! sam
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sam444
on January 17, 2011 at 8:41 PM
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Raye09
Wonderful to read you luv and that was word painted so beautifully I could see you brushing.Love to you from Kabu and I
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WileyJohn
on January 17, 2011 at 8:16 PM
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