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I am simply moved by the delicate voice here and the sweet tender feelings that I feel after reading your Dawn dreams --- so beautiful dear Sinome. xoxoxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 18, 2011 at 9:31 PM
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Sinome
I pray all the wishes of your heart come to fruition as beautiful as your verse luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 17, 2011 at 8:34 PM
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I always feel better after I read you, never fails.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 17, 2011 at 6:17 PM
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What an awesome feeling that must be to cause that.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 17, 2011 at 4:23 PM
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WOW! Somehow I'm speechless and perhaps still held spellbound.
posted by
jfm32
on January 17, 2011 at 3:35 PM
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but then I remember the echoes of the night,
the echoes from the dreams that I forgot
when I buried my wings so long ago
to become the soil where another's dreams could grow.
THIS IS ONE BEAUTIFUL, WELL WRITTEN POEM, I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE, IN MOST POEMS IF YOU CAN GET ONE GREAT LINE YOU HAVE DONE SOMETHING, HERE THERE ARE SO MANY I LOST COUNT.
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 17, 2011 at 12:33 PM
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Dawn again
a great and welcome feeling
posted by
malcolm
on January 17, 2011 at 7:34 AM
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Sinome
A poem of dreams - a dream of a poem...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 17, 2011 at 3:57 AM
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Wistfully appealling and your poor little wings. Of course that was something done to help others.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 17, 2011 at 12:29 AM
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some of the best thoughts are born with the dawn...thank you once again
darling.
posted by
Kabu
on January 16, 2011 at 7:46 PM
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Beautiful visions are got in the form of dreams at dawn. Lovely poem Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on January 16, 2011 at 7:37 PM
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