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I just don't see how Miss Amanda Gray, or anyone else, could turn away from such a witty and winsome man. Darling poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 29, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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if Ms Amanda only knew what she's missing.....
C.C....let her know how you really feell...melt that icy exterior she hides behind..
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(and don't put yourself through burnout - a few reposts or rewrites never hurt anyone)
posted by
Rumor
on December 29, 2010 at 7:31 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
Z It proves that the words of some folks are poetry sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on December 29, 2010 at 12:51 AM
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Well then CC, since you have it all organized..drinks,grub and all - Ms.Amanda Gray should have nothing to worry about...and were you really going to end your subscription??
Enjoyed the poem CC.
posted by
shobana
on December 28, 2010 at 3:36 PM
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Now what kind of wine is in that bottle? lol The poem was a delight! You are so right it is difficult to write one everyday! You should treat us to a few re-post, please! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 28, 2010 at 2:50 PM
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Rewrites are a necesary part of the process and forme it is a delight to
see this piece improved on and it gave me a realsense of emotion...stupid woman unbend for once and learn that five minutes with a real darlin'is better than a life time of boredom or abuse. See you have worked my emotions and that is wonderful. I am glad that you have renewed your subscription ....you are wanted here....end of discussion. Do hope you feel a little better today.
posted by
Kabu
on December 28, 2010 at 2:29 PM
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Ms Amanda Grey
Very enjoyable CC. I think Ms amanda Grey should rush over to your house straight away.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 28, 2010 at 12:05 PM
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Well, I must admit I do like this more in your 're-working' - More of a 'scene' and the vignette at the end ~ she seems rather dated? At any rate I am glad you are staying on a bit longer dear ChCh. It's truth about burn-out and it does happen to many - a writer, an artist, a person in overdoing...
write on when you can. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on December 28, 2010 at 9:44 AM
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Dear viewers whilst the flowers are thin on the ground I am trying to improve some reposts as believe me it is difficult to write moderately decent poems every day, we get too many burn outs on these sites and I didn't intend to overstay my ability, but there are so many nice people here that one becomes rather intoxicated by their sweet personalities. So I shall continue for another session.God Willing. Also stick to a bottle of wine lasting four days.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 28, 2010 at 8:21 AM
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