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What I wouldn't give to hear His voice once more
It was mesmerizing and I could sit for hours and listen to him tell stories.  His voice was that of an auctioneer and it was soft and sweet and kind and loving.  Now communication is telepathic and through unexpected written words from the strangest places but messages only he would send for guidance. What I wouldn't give to hear his voice once more.  Sending love and light and many blessings.

posted by skye08 on December 29, 2010 at 9:03 PM | link to this | reply

<3

and little works of art knock at my window

perfect. i love this line, it says so much with such few words

posted by linxixo on December 28, 2010 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

Nice poem, it really brings those feelings of loss and the desire to have what we all have lost home to fill that empty place they left in us once again, sometimes those feelings can be overwhelming.

posted by UtahJay on December 28, 2010 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Capturing what once was is only possible through new love I think. Lovely poetry as usual luv.

posted by WileyJohn on December 28, 2010 at 2:21 PM | link to this | reply

This is very sad
and moved me a good deal.

posted by malcolm on December 28, 2010 at 4:09 AM | link to this | reply

I know of many who wish they could go back in time.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on December 27, 2010 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply

 Very sweet in it's admission or confession...how dear my Sinome that you would write this.  Ah but I detest 'age' and such and so I continually see myself as 'sweet bird of youth' yes...LOL ~ always ~ xoxoxo Elyse

posted by elysianfields on December 27, 2010 at 11:58 AM | link to this | reply

Sometimes when I look in the mirror or at an old picture...
Ah but I love being more mature, knowing who I am and living with the man I love and who loves me. You just stay as lovely as you are dearest.

posted by Kabu on December 27, 2010 at 11:03 AM | link to this | reply

Well Simone I guess we would all be jealous if we could see you as you once were. I know that you were quite beauitiful and that tall gentleman knew it instaneouly. Well it is the gpysy in me you see. So I look beyond your sadness and try to see you as you once were.   

posted by C_C_T on December 27, 2010 at 10:11 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

» It’s nice when you find that mood with someone now love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on December 27, 2010 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply