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Re: Joab
You are so right! joab

posted by joab3 on November 9, 2010 at 7:05 AM | link to this | reply

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Hi Sinome . . . and so were mine afterwards.joab

posted by joab3 on November 9, 2010 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

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You could have "peeked".joab

posted by joab3 on November 9, 2010 at 7:03 AM | link to this | reply

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Ah . . . but her movements were naturally sensuous. And we met several times later.

posted by joab3 on November 9, 2010 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

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As was she.joab

posted by joab3 on November 9, 2010 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply

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I used to have friends in Nottingham and they seemed to like it there.

CORNCRAKE. . . thanks for the info. joab

posted by joab3 on November 9, 2010 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

Do go on Joab ~ I like your Venice Beach writings ~ this one is 'short and sweet and tantalizing' ~ Ely 

posted by elysianfields on November 8, 2010 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

It's tough when one is out to be sated as opposed to being fulfilled! I loved the contrast! And, I did take note that it was written some time ago and it makes it all the better! sam  

posted by sam444 on November 8, 2010 at 12:01 AM | link to this | reply

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I put my hands over my eyes all the way through your poem honest. I didn't want to be a voyeur...

posted by Cheerygirl on November 7, 2010 at 8:58 AM | link to this | reply

Wow!!!!  This left my senses twirling :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on November 7, 2010 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

Joab

R Aah temptations. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on November 7, 2010 at 12:29 AM | link to this | reply

That's the way it goes joab short and sweet. No dear S S East midlands. The distance in America amazes me one lady said  it was too hot to go to Church as it was seventy miles away. Different roads I suppose we still have as lot of country roads but not so many now, it use to be hairy following slow tractors and trying to overtake. I used to have friends in Nottingham and they seemed to like it there.

posted by C_C_T on November 7, 2010 at 12:22 AM | link to this | reply