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I could imagine the whole thing happening..very well written. Thank you so much for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on November 8, 2010 at 10:26 PM
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You went deep into the well and its a read for this season.
posted by
Mystereo
on October 31, 2010 at 9:40 AM
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Wow! Yeah, that's very powerful! I have a lot of nightmares like that myself! Great poem!
posted by
steamfly
on October 31, 2010 at 8:30 AM
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...those dreams are fewer and farther in between these days...thank god! 
posted by
moon_trance
on October 30, 2010 at 4:59 PM
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quite an awareness --- conciousness from dark --- wow, this is quite the write (very well written, suspenseful and full of great imagery) Elyse ~ Happy Halloween and be safe!
posted by
elysianfields
on October 30, 2010 at 2:07 PM
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Good idea to turn the light on at that point! 
posted by
mariss9
on October 30, 2010 at 11:44 AM
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eburns....
a very suspenseful dream (nightmare) that builds in suspense step by step, literally....it reminded me of a similar nightmare I had as a youngster, the memory of which has never left me..
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posted by
Rumor
on October 30, 2010 at 8:48 AM
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R Poetic psychological suspense. ! BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 30, 2010 at 12:04 AM
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This is fantastic! I loved the end, I was headed in another direction of anticipation and then it was right before my eyes! So awesome! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 29, 2010 at 3:56 PM
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Crikey EB. I would get a small pad. Quite a nightmare and it felt cold perhaps you should have a thicker duvet. Good read.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 29, 2010 at 1:38 PM
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when the lights go out
Riveting stuff.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 29, 2010 at 11:08 AM
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