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excellent flow here, I really enjoyed this.
posted by
spiderfly
on October 29, 2010 at 9:31 AM
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eburns....
very strikingly surreal in its mood and atmosphere...one is left to imagine what "could" have happened if the drifter had driven off in his condition.....well said!..
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posted by
Rumor
on October 28, 2010 at 1:24 PM
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Strongly expressed! Great writing..
posted by
Kate07
on October 28, 2010 at 11:21 AM
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Wow ~ this is a great read. I read it a couple of times --- powerful ~ Write on!!!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 28, 2010 at 11:06 AM
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Excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 28, 2010 at 7:51 AM
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The clarity of the poem is superb! It is no mean feat to keep the scene so vivid whiole maintaining such a demanding rhyme scheme, well done!
posted by
lionreign
on October 28, 2010 at 3:42 AM
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Great details! Thanks for your visit!
posted by
Nita09
on October 28, 2010 at 1:51 AM
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A purpose filled journey quite enjoyable with a good ending.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 28, 2010 at 12:41 AM
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This is excellent imagery, so very engaging! I was visualizing it as I read along! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 27, 2010 at 11:03 PM
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Y The reader relaxes that you braked and captured such a poetic portrayal in words love. BC-A, Bill’s RTTst
posted by
BC-A
on October 27, 2010 at 10:17 PM
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I could picture the whole thing, fantastic. Thanks so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on October 27, 2010 at 7:53 PM
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I love it... Welcome to Blogit
posted by
Justi
on October 27, 2010 at 6:24 PM
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