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I thought it was a very good correlation that was actually unsaid! It seems that rain pours down on us but hatred is the flood you referenced! Very, very nice on the meaning! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 14, 2010 at 5:54 AM
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Potent stuff! there is a lot of passion and power in this verse and some very good imagery
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2010 at 7:21 AM
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Well eburn hardly restfull, but I suppose you don't want it to be. I expect you will get it out of your system and feel better for it, I am not running the poem down only explaining my reaction to your work and I'm pretty often wrong
posted by
C_C_T
on October 12, 2010 at 11:32 PM
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excellent
posted by
Star5_
on October 12, 2010 at 7:38 PM
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