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Good stuff, utilizing the senses can bring out the greatest poetry.

posted by csherloc on October 2, 2010 at 1:10 AM | link to this | reply

Good stuff, utilizing the senses can bring out the greatest poetry.

posted by csherloc on October 2, 2010 at 1:10 AM | link to this | reply

posted by poetjpb on October 1, 2010 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for the information never thought like this, maybe i'll try those!

posted by Mystereo on October 1, 2010 at 7:44 AM | link to this | reply

Walking on grass with no shoes on is great. Also smelling freshly cut grass it's a perfume they should bottle for the senses.

posted by Cheerygirl on September 30, 2010 at 12:17 PM | link to this | reply

Poet - I wrote this yesterday with and by your prompt - http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/elysianfields/672266

I think you are wonderful inspiring as you do.   ~ and your links are amazing; you are gifted and talented and busy - My goodness.  I adore the artwork - the collage especially.  I know some that do collage art and I have to tell you, you have the 'art' down.  I liked the book for your grandchild as well.  Very impressive and professional.  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on September 30, 2010 at 6:38 AM | link to this | reply

 I am always willing to listen to advice and as my so called lawn is only about six inches high and I have to take a cleansing walk through it to feed my one and only goose, perhaps I do gain an unknown benefit. I admit it does look verdant and rather beautiful compared to a crew cut on a lawn. Sorry I cannot do your beach thing it make my toes feel cold.   

posted by C_C_T on September 30, 2010 at 12:13 AM | link to this | reply

well thank you I have tonssssssssssssssssss

posted by poetjpb on September 29, 2010 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

I hope you will keep adding tips like this
I'm trying to add a bit of "color" when I write.  These posts are very helpful.

posted by Bel_ on September 29, 2010 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

It can be amazing what one will see if they close their eyes and allow the mind to wander free! Excellent prompt! sam 

posted by sam444 on September 29, 2010 at 6:07 PM | link to this | reply