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This was a magicial heartful yet, you took it as a flashback upon you life!
posted by
Mystereo
on October 6, 2010 at 5:08 PM
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Re: the journey begins - bravo! but...
there was no BUT intended....it merely was a new beginning of what I was hoping to find from the date....which did not happen....therefore the journey begins and continues as if roaming through the wilderness....reference to my poem...the lone wolf roams!
posted by
TheLoneWolf
on September 8, 2010 at 2:29 PM
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I enjoyed this and I know that moment you have written, there really is no where to go after that except back to the internet.
posted by
spiderfly
on September 8, 2010 at 5:31 AM
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I love it when a new journey begins that is poignant! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 8, 2010 at 2:40 AM
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the journey begins - bravo! but...
This may sound all wrong, but you HAD me until the second sentence in the last paragraph! And no, I wasn't looking for some sex- crazed finale. I was waiting for WHATEVER you were heading for, as long as it was as clear and intense as what had gone before! It seemed a little like, you know, a copout. You had us going and then left us hanging with well, words.
posted by
2902
on September 7, 2010 at 7:44 PM
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