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Re: Re: Rumor
Orcalion, yes I have and you never know..either idea is a good one...I've also thought of putting all my stories together into an E-book, so who knows..:)...
posted by
Rumor
on September 25, 2010 at 9:54 AM
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Re: Rumor
I just realized I wrote the story title wrong.. it should have been 'A Murder of Crows' .. I'm sorry..
posted by
orcalion
on September 22, 2010 at 9:55 PM
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Re: Rumor
I did the two story as one.. but they were more excited with the battle in the corn field than the race.. they kept asking for the battle scene.. I will admit my guilt here.. I altered the ending, so that the crows were not poking Jack Muggins to death, but together the crows picked him up and flew him to a far away deserted island where he could not find his way back to the human world.. 
I told Ariq last night that you were happy that they liked the story, and he said he still remembered the story and he still liked it.. I will read it again to the boys when they come home from school.. 
Have you considered making the story your 'Item' in Blogit? or publish it as an e-book? 
posted by
orcalion
on September 22, 2010 at 9:53 PM
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Orcalion, did Ariq and Aza ever read "Ghost Drive" ..
(my current fiction posting which I am rewriting and revising somewhat)..."A Murder of Crows" was a sequel to it...(I think they could handle "Ghost Drive", but you might want to check it out first..
..)..tell them both I am really happy they liked ."....."Crows".....
posted by
Rumor
on September 14, 2010 at 12:08 PM
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Re: yellowrose55
The link is the word 'post' .. but here it is again, just in case something is wrong with the one in my blogit post.. Ariq's Ghost House
Enjoy the stories.. and thank you for visiting..
posted by
orcalion
on September 9, 2010 at 12:17 AM
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Orcalion, I would love to read his story. Where is the link?
posted by
yellowrose55
on September 8, 2010 at 7:45 PM
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Thank you, Everyone..
I showed Ariq all your comments here.. and he was blushing out of pride.. 
I told him that everyone -including Rumor- makes mistakes in tenses.. but he was more excited in asking, "Seriously, Mum? Did Rumor really shiver when he was reading my stories?" (I'm not sure if I ever mentioned that 'Crows of Death' -with little gore adjustments- is one of Ariq and Aza's favorite bedtime stories)..
He thanked all of you for the comments and I'm thanking you too..
Having a blog has helped Ariq learn to express himself and reflect on himself better. After having a blog for some time, he is enjoying it more now..
Thank you..
posted by
orcalion
on September 3, 2010 at 8:11 AM
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That's lovely, will certainly check it out. Thanks very much for your visit.
posted by
Nita09
on September 3, 2010 at 1:54 AM
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I checked out his blog; wonderful imagination! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 2, 2010 at 3:24 PM
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What a darling boy he is, and so creative. I checked out everything he had on his blog. It was great.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 2, 2010 at 3:01 PM
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tell Ariq, very well done..I read them both and got the shivers...:)
and tell him I still get my tenses mixed up at times, too..
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posted by
Rumor
on September 2, 2010 at 1:07 PM
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How wonderful - I think creativity should be encouraged in the young (and in the old)
posted by
lionreign
on September 2, 2010 at 8:54 AM
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