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posted by
Straightforward
on August 27, 2010 at 7:49 AM
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Imagine
Beautiful poem, will be greater when this dream comes through.
posted by
csherloc
on August 27, 2010 at 4:49 AM
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I liked how you set the imagery up to be so enticing and desirable and then with the close in a way to remind one what they have! Well done, indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 27, 2010 at 1:14 AM
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