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Amazing how much can you say with so little my friend... Fabulous! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 27, 2010 at 11:27 PM
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This is two fold for me, it's either encapsulated with life, or not taking time to smell the roses! A tremendous amount of imagery and thought provoking in this tercet! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 27, 2010 at 12:04 AM
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{ That’s a jolly good way to be love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 26, 2010 at 12:02 AM
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wonderful title, and 1st 2 lines ,but busy seeing what? But don't mind me. I'm just the reader turned mind reader, foreseeing the next qualitative event of how to change an outer landscape into the internal possible. I wouldn't worry too much about leaping into next stanza, because if you have it together, I think we could all follow you.
Title,and 1st 2 lines really work!
posted by
jfm32
on August 25, 2010 at 9:41 PM
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It does just float on by.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 25, 2010 at 7:40 PM
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