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Re: Very nicely done
Thank you L.R. I'm sorry I,m starting to do brevies, don't look it up unless you have the longer Oxford. I'm getting one of those electronic books basically for the dictionary as I am rather dyslexic, I expect you can make your own. Good one helping Sam. 
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 7:52 AM
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Very nicely done
and a perspective I'd have never thought
posted by
lionreign
on August 24, 2010 at 7:41 AM
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Thank you janey, be lucky.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:56 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Yes Bill space in the mind ,I hope.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:49 AM
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Re: CORNCRAKE
Sadly I played with big stakes Wiley, but one doesn't know much when one is young
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:47 AM
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Re: I like it when you let yourself slide through that opening back
Kabu you know I am not, I like to share a bit of sadness around
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:45 AM
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Well Sam they are only human and that takes a bit of swallowing sometimes, see you around I didn't want to give you advice as I read lionreign's qualifications.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:42 AM
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Yes it is John we all do it in the mushroom circle, but I was fed up with getting my feet wet.
I have an ability that you seem to have lost never swallow the mushroom but if you have a hole in your cheek, well think about it.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:38 AM
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Re: to a lady
Well Bob it was a bit lively once I got there.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:33 AM
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Re: C.C., oh yes, to go back in time, or not?
Well one can't help trying these new links that keep appearing Rumour. Do you have telivision.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:31 AM
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FS Please dont say that FS I guess it is easy to say when one's future is longer than one's past.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:29 AM
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Re: CC
You are right as always Troosha Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:25 AM
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Re: Wow, this is so warm, CC!
Hmm, Katray not good for my metabolism I expect. Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:23 AM
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Well only if I can pick up the tab Shobana that's the prob. splash, splash.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 12:21 AM
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Loved your poem! Glad to have found you.
posted by
janey_
on August 23, 2010 at 11:01 PM
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CORNCAKE
T6 An expression of love can be without time but you’ll need space eventually sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 23, 2010 at 10:10 PM
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CORNCRAKE
Yeah, Kabu has it right methinks, you played the ladies I played the horses.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 23, 2010 at 8:09 PM
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I like it when you let yourself slide through that opening back
into the past...quite the ladies man me thinks.
posted by
Kabu
on August 23, 2010 at 6:26 PM
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I like Rumor's comment! It is grand imagery! And, I am slowly getting things back together! I still have the towel in my hand, lol! Lionreign gave me a huge hand and another friend has come to my rescue! I need to get an external drive before I load too much on my computer, I've grown to mistrust them immensely! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 23, 2010 at 4:38 PM
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1st line craked me up...slipping thru time sideways...while I didn't know this was to be endemnic (look it up) to the write, and slipping thru the past as present. Is this what they call in English "tongue-in-cheek"?
posted by
jfm32
on August 23, 2010 at 4:30 PM
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1st line craked me up...slipping thru time sideways...while I didn't know this was to be endemnic (look it up) to the write, and slipping thru the past as present. Is this what they call in English "tongue-in-cheek"?
posted by
jfm32
on August 23, 2010 at 4:29 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 23, 2010 at 4:29 PM
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to a lady
You are the poet of the inexpressible.
posted by
2902
on August 23, 2010 at 4:26 PM
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C.C., oh yes, to go back in time, or not?
Is it worth it, or would it do more harm than good?..
..(she certainly sounds worth the trip..
..).
.....
posted by
Rumor
on August 23, 2010 at 3:19 PM
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The past and present mix to create a scene that reminds the speaker that those days are no more.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 23, 2010 at 2:04 PM
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CC
An absolutely sensational piece about reminiscence - the heart will travel all on its own some days.
posted by
Troosha
on August 23, 2010 at 11:40 AM
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Wow, this is so warm, CC!
Beautiful and sparky..:)
posted by
Katray2
on August 23, 2010 at 10:41 AM
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Hi CC, my aren't you the romantic here...Sensational poem. CC. Thanks you for stopping by..glad you liked my swimming pool poem..lol.
posted by
shobana
on August 23, 2010 at 10:26 AM
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