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"destroys my stiffness brick by brick"...........amen to that
posted by
Mickmick0506
on October 1, 2010 at 3:26 PM
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it's amazing what a voice can do
nicely said!
posted by
lionreign
on August 23, 2010 at 8:26 AM
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How lovely..little things like that makes a great impression and cheers to you too.
posted by
shobana
on August 21, 2010 at 4:39 PM
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Makes me think of my sweet husband arriving home from a long day. Corny I know, but nonetheless, your sweet poem made me smile and think of the joy I find in hearing his voice.
posted by
janey_
on August 19, 2010 at 9:16 PM
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A pleasant, meaningful voice is one to treasure! I liked the rhyme scheme it set up a fine cadence! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 18, 2010 at 7:30 PM
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some people have great smoothing voices, I have always been complimented on my voice
posted by
Lanetay
on August 17, 2010 at 7:14 PM
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A voice can do so much for us.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 17, 2010 at 6:35 PM
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I love the line that your stress is like a brick and hearing your voice tears down that wall one brick at a time.... Nice
posted by
Justi
on August 17, 2010 at 1:22 PM
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just hearing your voice
Straightforward, just reading your verse is very soothing and moving for the soul..nicely done. Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on August 17, 2010 at 11:26 AM
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Hm, Straightforward last two lines are brill.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 17, 2010 at 10:36 AM
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