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That was a good first, but it needn't be the last, man.
posted by
Straightforward
on August 14, 2010 at 9:31 PM
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That's your worst?
Hmmm. I think it's pretty good!
posted by
SpitFire70
on August 14, 2010 at 8:32 PM
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Are you for real!...
This is excellent poetry !
posted by
WaterKat
on August 14, 2010 at 8:16 PM
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I think it's interesting!..:)..if this is your worst, I'm embarrassed
to post mine, haha..
This evokes an image of a lonely soul tired and hungry, the t.v. playing loudly, a can of soup or somesuch food being stubborn and soon quite un-friendly to the hand trying to open it..but don't mind me, I read things kind of strangely sometimes, lol..
posted by
Katray2
on August 14, 2010 at 7:58 PM
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bitter but good
posted by
icedlatte
on August 14, 2010 at 7:40 PM
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Well then we are tied! Because jfm32 told me I had wrote the two worst! AHAHHAHA! Then, I guess I still hold the belt. Not a shabby poem at all.
posted by
aceblade
on August 14, 2010 at 4:11 PM
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I think your poem is fine. It's only the last line which is the worst I ever read...lol
posted by
jfm32
on August 14, 2010 at 3:18 PM
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I've read far worse, your bravery should receive a star
posted by
C_C_T
on August 14, 2010 at 11:47 AM
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How it become worst? It's nice...
posted by
kwentuhero
on August 14, 2010 at 10:57 AM
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