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That was a good first, but it needn't be the last, man.

posted by Straightforward on August 14, 2010 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply

That's your worst?
Hmmm. I think it's pretty good!

posted by SpitFire70 on August 14, 2010 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

Are you for real!...
This is excellent poetry !

posted by WaterKat on August 14, 2010 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

I think it's interesting!..:)..if this is your worst, I'm embarrassed
to post mine, haha.. This evokes an image of a lonely soul tired and hungry, the t.v. playing loudly, a can of soup or somesuch food being stubborn and soon quite un-friendly to the hand trying to open it..but don't mind me, I read things kind of strangely sometimes, lol..

posted by Katray2 on August 14, 2010 at 7:58 PM | link to this | reply

bitter but good

posted by icedlatte on August 14, 2010 at 7:40 PM | link to this | reply

Well then we are tied!  Because jfm32 told me I had wrote the two worst! AHAHHAHA!  Then, I guess I still hold the belt.  Not a shabby poem at all.

posted by aceblade on August 14, 2010 at 4:11 PM | link to this | reply

I think your poem is fine. It's only the last line which is the worst I ever read...lol

posted by jfm32 on August 14, 2010 at 3:18 PM | link to this | reply

I've read far worse, your bravery should receive a star 

posted by C_C_T on August 14, 2010 at 11:47 AM | link to this | reply

How it become worst? It's nice...

posted by kwentuhero on August 14, 2010 at 10:57 AM | link to this | reply

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