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so beautiful.
posted by
RomaKay
on August 24, 2010 at 7:52 PM
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£R The wind makes a good companion love. Ha look at an old windbag like me. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 15, 2010 at 6:44 AM
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Such beautiful thoughts of the wind Fema. Very well written.
posted by
shobana
on August 14, 2010 at 6:40 PM
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I agree with 2092. I really liked the imagry.
posted by
jfm32
on August 14, 2010 at 4:47 PM
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The wind comes out of nowhere in my neck of the woods so I enjoyed the line of a gentle breeze as a reminder! Wind can be so destructive! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on August 14, 2010 at 4:44 PM
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Her last dance
Very good poetic report on your date with the wind.
posted by
csherloc
on August 14, 2010 at 5:08 AM
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One of your best Femia you really went with the action , it is nice when one can picture the scene and shake the sand out of one's shoes afterwards Have nice weekend dear friend.MB
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 11:05 PM
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last dance
A really lovely poem. There is a lot of motion and picture-making and economy of expression that make it a very satisfying "read". Congratulations.
posted by
2902
on August 13, 2010 at 5:46 PM
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