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I thought the cadence was fine for me! Another delightful poem, the close was wonderful! sam
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sam444
on August 9, 2010 at 7:31 PM
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surroundings
Rhythm's a bit uneven, but a familiar well-rendered scene. I recognized and loved it!
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2902
on August 9, 2010 at 6:34 PM
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surroundings
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2902
on August 9, 2010 at 6:33 PM
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Gloria
R What a beautiful play on the moon scene at the lake through poetry love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on August 9, 2010 at 11:21 AM
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It sounds like a place that I would love to be at the rising of the moon.
Well done.
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TAPS.
on August 9, 2010 at 10:48 AM
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