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An Excellent poem. Thanks so much for the condolence.
posted by
shobana
on July 28, 2010 at 8:34 PM
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Gosh, this is so like what I experience....
posted by
Straightforward
on July 27, 2010 at 1:23 AM
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lovely poem so well written/LBJ
posted by
MsJudy
on July 25, 2010 at 11:01 PM
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Nice work! I really like this imagery:
I'll always be, because I dig the squeeze of your arms like an octopus, wrapping me up in warmth
I enjoyed the ending, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 25, 2010 at 6:51 PM
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