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Re: You are welcomehere as a guest but not if you turn into this bull
That is the trouble Kabu but it's really only a tiny Bull and a bit of Bull and I always clean my carpets after a they have been trampled on, and I think I might do it again today now everywhere is warm. Why did you mention it,perhaps I'll just do the bits that show. 

posted by C_C_T on July 9, 2010 at 11:26 PM | link to this | reply

You are welcomehere as a guest but not if you turn into this bull
we had the carpets cleaned this week.LOL BUT HEY THIS IS GOOD AND YES I LIKE THIS BLOG...WELL I ALWAYS POP IN SO I MUST.

posted by Kabu on July 9, 2010 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you jfm. One has to be a bit careful on these sites love poems or similar styles are so in demand that one is wary of deviating from that flowery pathway. I never get much response on this Odds and Bods site, well I would count you as four people. The trouble is I can't spell and sometimes I can't even think what a word means, but I do like sardines.    

posted by C_C_T on July 9, 2010 at 11:17 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Taps, I don't suppose you know how to get this ring out of my nose.

posted by C_C_T on July 9, 2010 at 11:02 AM | link to this | reply

Wow! This has to be one of your best. Intricate and very clear, fresh imagry, and just the right amount of suspence. I'm glad you took my advise (lol) and write about things "exactly as they are". I almost found myself spiraling from a threshold. Other than that, I did like the poem.

posted by jfm32 on July 9, 2010 at 10:16 AM | link to this | reply

Fascinating!  I've seen the bulls in Pamplona.  Know a man who was gored by one of them when he was young.  I can picture you snorting and pawing. 

posted by TAPS. on July 9, 2010 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply