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Strong words, very well said!
posted by
steamfly
on July 27, 2010 at 2:22 PM
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Let me be "frank" - I enjoyed your fun play with words!
posted by
janey_
on July 12, 2010 at 6:31 PM
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Very clever...
and the perspectives are brilliant
posted by
lionreign
on July 12, 2010 at 7:32 AM
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interesting poem
posted by
Lanetay
on July 10, 2010 at 9:32 AM
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Your perception is keen.
For me, in the midst of the hurting emptiness takes over and when the healing begins the hand reaches out.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 10, 2010 at 8:31 AM
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@ Good anatomy. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 10, 2010 at 6:24 AM
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I thought to be very poignant! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 10, 2010 at 12:56 AM
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This is Very Interesting Poetry...
posted by
WaterKat
on July 9, 2010 at 7:36 PM
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Hopefully we can learn from each for a better future.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 9, 2010 at 7:07 PM
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Blank is where the heart is
Very entertaining.
posted by
2Philomena
on July 9, 2010 at 1:13 PM
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goos enough ..I enjoyed this.
posted by
Kabu
on July 9, 2010 at 12:46 PM
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Great work! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 9, 2010 at 10:08 AM
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Stank is where you pinched your nose, eewwwing.
Sorry, I couldn't help it. You make me want to continue your train of thought.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 9, 2010 at 8:20 AM
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Heart is
Kplunk is where the poem is very good use of verbal play on words. Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on July 9, 2010 at 8:13 AM
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Awesome interplay!
A topsy-turvy world and the effects; you describe it so well.
posted by
Katray2
on July 9, 2010 at 7:34 AM
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Fantastic poem!! Thank you for describing that condition so succintly and well.
posted by
mariss9
on July 9, 2010 at 7:21 AM
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Very well written Straight, but your poor heart, well I know it feels like this sometimes. Perhaps if you wrote more of your humorous poetry. I was going to make a joke But I remembered you were kind to me once, so I resisted, thank you again
posted by
C_C_T
on July 9, 2010 at 6:01 AM
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short and kinda funny
posted by
ain_natasha
on July 9, 2010 at 5:20 AM
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Thanks for the anks!
I love the way this little poem develops - it's fun to read. It sounds like it was fun to write. Thanks from one of the Yanks (sorry...)
posted by
2902
on July 9, 2010 at 4:44 AM
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The "anks"
posted by
2902
on July 9, 2010 at 4:38 AM
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